I am a sucker for textures, and thus love this game simply for that reason alone.
But, that's not all. It's the combination of several factors strung together, like the story line, the environment, the sounds and the soundscapes that drive this game to a 5 star rating.
Well done and thank you for creating this game. Kudos to all involved.
I really hope to see more of your work in the future. I'm following you, so I'll get a notification when you add something new. And. you're welcome :o]
Maybe Try deleting the old file and downloading a new one? I'm quite a newbie in game development, so if this doesn't work, I can't really think of other solutions.
Your game starts at 10:57. This was excellent and you have a really good eye for building suspense! This being your first game really blew us away. It wasn't dark that getting around was chore, the glimpse of the killer, creepy destroyed wall art and bloody trash bags, Lil Beef even said this was great and getting him to think that and say it is no small feat!
It is fine for a first game, but I believe if you make some small changes in the game it would bring a major difference. When playing I went over certain sections and commented on them. Hope it helps.
Get ready for some heavy criticism, I got a lot to say.
First of all, the audio. The sound effects were very random, loud and they suddenly cut off, you could have added a fade in and out to them so they feel smoother, the main menu could use some SFX for the buttons and some music as well and during gameplay you should have added some ambient noise, that way it adds more to the atmosphere and gives the player an uncomfortable feeling, some footsteps for the player would have been rly good so the player has some audio feedback when is walking, also there are some heavy footsteps when going down the stairs that seem to be activated by a collider, that's very odd since if I stop moving the sound still plays and i can go back and reactivate it, it feels very out of place.
Now lets get to the visuals, at first the quit button from the menu doesn't highlight like the play button does, the title text could look more interesting by changing the font or other text effects, when I started the game all I saw is black, I tough the game was loading or something until I actually move the mouse and see the light behind me, you could have added more lights to the rail tracks zone or make the player face the way he has to go from the start, there was also some weird black fading when I went to the sides of the tracks which feel completely unnecessary, same when the lights turned off and got the flashlight, on the first hallway there were so many lights the framerate was dropping, you should have used baked lighting instead of so many point lights to save performance, some of the walls seemed like they were colliding in some areas and the model was glitching, a lot of the models were clearly from the asset store so I wont complain about the level design style inconsistencies, I understand that 3D modeling is hard.
The game could also used some options for volume and sensitivity at least because for me the game was really loud and the mouse sensitivity pretty high, other settings could be for resolution, fullscreen toggle, vsync and other graphical stuff but for a game this short is not exactly required.
Ok I shat on your game long enough lol, time for some stuff I liked, fist of all the concept for the game is rly nice since well...it made me click your page, the chase sequence felt good, tough a cool this u could have added is the ghost starting to get closer and closer to you but since is your fist game ill cut you some slack.
You will definitely improve as time goes on and if you keep working. Good luck.
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It's a very nice first game! Those jump scares actually got me and Luigi loves the ambiance!
Super short but was really creepy. Great job for a first game!
I hope this game is not too scary. I'm scared out, haha
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I am a sucker for textures, and thus love this game simply for that reason alone.But, that's not all. It's the combination of several factors strung together, like the story line, the environment, the sounds and the soundscapes that drive this game to a 5 star rating.
Well done and thank you for creating this game. Kudos to all involved.
Thank You :)
@ TLR123,
I really hope to see more of your work in the future. I'm following you, so I'll get a notification when you add something new. And. you're welcome :o]
I will be playing this live tomorrow 8/1 around 6:30-7 PM EST =D
https://www.twitch.tv/twallsx4
Watched the stream. Thanks for playing :)
It doesn't run
I tested both of the download files, it works completely fine for me. Did windows block you from opening it ?
No, i don't get any kind of message, it just closes 1 second upon clicking it
Maybe Try deleting the old file and downloading a new one?
I'm quite a newbie in game development, so if this doesn't work, I can't really think of other solutions.
Creepy horror game. Great work!
Thanks for playing :)
mum... i peed myself.... (great game :D). Loved the sound design, ambience, all of it. *mwah
Thanks :)
Thanks for playing. Good video btw.
Thank you for playing
Hello from Brazil! I played on my channel. Very nice for your first game :)
Thank you :)
It is fine for a first game, but I believe if you make some small changes in the game it would bring a major difference. When playing I went over certain sections and commented on them. Hope it helps.
Thanks for playing. I'll definitely improve on some flaws.
Get ready for some heavy criticism, I got a lot to say.
First of all, the audio. The sound effects were very random, loud and they suddenly cut off, you could have added a fade in and out to them so they feel smoother, the main menu could use some SFX for the buttons and some music as well and during gameplay you should have added some ambient noise, that way it adds more to the atmosphere and gives the player an uncomfortable feeling, some footsteps for the player would have been rly good so the player has some audio feedback when is walking, also there are some heavy footsteps when going down the stairs that seem to be activated by a collider, that's very odd since if I stop moving the sound still plays and i can go back and reactivate it, it feels very out of place.
Now lets get to the visuals, at first the quit button from the menu doesn't highlight like the play button does, the title text could look more interesting by changing the font or other text effects, when I started the game all I saw is black, I tough the game was loading or something until I actually move the mouse and see the light behind me, you could have added more lights to the rail tracks zone or make the player face the way he has to go from the start, there was also some weird black fading when I went to the sides of the tracks which feel completely unnecessary, same when the lights turned off and got the flashlight, on the first hallway there were so many lights the framerate was dropping, you should have used baked lighting instead of so many point lights to save performance, some of the walls seemed like they were colliding in some areas and the model was glitching, a lot of the models were clearly from the asset store so I wont complain about the level design style inconsistencies, I understand that 3D modeling is hard.
The game could also used some options for volume and sensitivity at least because for me the game was really loud and the mouse sensitivity pretty high, other settings could be for resolution, fullscreen toggle, vsync and other graphical stuff but for a game this short is not exactly required.
Ok I shat on your game long enough lol, time for some stuff I liked, fist of all the concept for the game is rly nice since well...it made me click your page, the chase sequence felt good, tough a cool this u could have added is the ghost starting to get closer and closer to you but since is your fist game ill cut you some slack.
You will definitely improve as time goes on and if you keep working. Good luck.
Criticism noted. Thank you for playing :)
https://youtu.be/9OQ4jOKHeII
Thanks for playing
For your first game its pretty good great job
Thanks
For your first game this was pretty decent. Made a video on it.
Thanks :) Nice Video Btw.